10:06 PM, Wednesday February 15th 2023
Hello, WASABAE !
Your work is great and here are my observations:
1-Your superimposed lines exercise looks great: the lines are smooth, confident. They don't fray at both ends, you did 2 pages and the lengths are different. You did all that you were asked, good job.
2-Your ghosted lines are also good, confident, smooth, very accurate, don't arc much. Great!
3-In ghosted planes exercises you keep the good work with your lines, no remarks. Good job!
4-Your Ellipses exercise also shows effort: ellipses are smooth, planned, accurate, and you draw through them several times. Everything's in place.
5-Your Ellipses in planes exercises also turned out very nice.
6-Your funnels are perfect: smooth, accurate, aligned to minor axis ( a few don’t) but still great job!
7-In your plotted perspective exercise all the lines are drawn correctly, except one of the boxes in the upper plane clearly has not ideal vertical lines. It is not a mistake though (because we use ruler there), just an observation.
8- Your rough perspective exercise looks like it can use some improvement :- lines are wobbly , back faces are way off…
!!! The lines making the front and back faces of the box should be parallel and perpendicular to the horizon line..
Although you did improve on the second page but still could have done better..
!!!! I think you should redo this exercise…
9- !!! Your rotated boxes exercise also needs improvement : the boxes are just slightly rotated ,in fact the third box on either side isn’t rotated at all , corner boxes are a little off, . Also the back faces are very off: https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/17/guessing , they need to be tighter, just as front faces. Unfortunately, I added this 9th remark of mine later, cause I forgot to look at this exercise. It would actually be nice to redo this exercise during warmups , paying more attention to the back faces of the boxes and making sure that the boxes are rotated. Right now it looks like the boxes are too close to the viewer. !!!
10-In organic perspective exercise you do seem to grasp the concept although the boxes are a bit off.
!!!!! No need stress over the last two exercises
they are supposed to be hard and you’ll have a better grasp of them when you do the box challenge so make sure to revisit them during warmups …
!!! you should redo rough perspective exercises at least one page!!!
You can reply here if you have any questions or thoughts.
Keep up the good work and good luck!
Next Steps:
Rough perspective one more try!!