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2:07 AM, Tuesday December 13th 2022

Lines:

  • Your superimposed lines are great, single origin point and some divergence as expected

  • Your ghosted lines show start and end points and don't wobble, all good

  • Your ghosted planes look a little rushed - some lines have start and end points, others look like you went for it without plotting the end point, causing you to over- or -under draw. Always plot the end point of your line first, and use the ghosting method before committing pen to paper to make the mark. Accuracy will come quicker this way.

Ellipses

  • Ellipses look great, you confidently drew through them 2-3 times even if they weren't accurate, which is as intended.

  • The same is true for ellipses in planes - good confident mark making! Accuracy will come with practice.

  • Funnels - great job keeping inside the guide curves, but remember each ellipse should be bisected by the minor axis with equal size on either side of that axis. Something to practice in warmups going forward.

Boxes

  • Plotted perspective turned out great!

  • Organic perspective looks like you did generally nOK with the boxes below the horizon but had more trouble with estimating the lines to the vp above the horizon. Somthing to work on in your warmups for sure.

  • Rotated boxes - great job keeping the gaps small and using the adjacent boxes as guides for new lines. Might be easier to draw this a bit bigger next time, it'll make rotating the boxes easier too.

  • Awesome job on the organic perspective exercise with relative size of boxes, even if the box construction is sometimes a bit wonky.

Next Steps:

Definitey tackle the 250 box challenge!

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7:27 AM, Friday January 6th 2023

Thank you so much for the feedback! And I'll do as you said and make sure to take it easy and do some warm up LOL. Best of luck on our journeys!

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