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11:42 AM, Tuesday August 9th 2022

Hi Uncomfortable,

Thank you for the feedback, I have uploaded the missing branch exercise :)

I'll make sure to keep this feedback and previou feedback in mind for future lessons.

5:15 PM, Wednesday August 10th 2022

Side from a couple spots where you didn't quite extend your edge segments fully halfway to the next ellipse (as shown here - note how it results in a more sudden, less seamless transition from one to the next), your branches are looking good.

One thing you may want to do going forward is to try to use the last chunk of the previous segment as a runway, overlapping it directly rather than drawing your next segment where the last one ought to have been. This will make things a bit more challenging, since you're forced to account for any mistakes from the previous stroke, but doing so will help you learn more efficiently from the process.

I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

Next Steps:

Move onto lesson 4.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
5:47 PM, Wednesday August 10th 2022

Thanks! Will make sure to reflect on your valuable feedback :)

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