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4:01 PM, Tuesday August 1st 2023

Hello and thank you for your reply I will try my best to fix all of the critiques in my work and thank you for drawing out examples with instructions. I have one question though what do you mean by "I have given you a pace for this". do you mean a certain amount of time I have to spend on each exercise if so I don't think you have mentioned it in the critique.

Thank you for all of the feed back and have a great day.

2:48 AM, Wednesday August 2nd 2023

oh sorry, for some reason it didn't save the revision, let me type it over here

you may only do one page of any exercise on a given day no more than that, less is okay or even good. just make sure you give all of your attention and focus when you're at it, if you get tired take a break.

you must rewatch and reread/listen THE ENTIRITY of the rough prespective, rotated boxes, and organic prespective exercises before doing revisions, ideally without fast forwarding on normal speed, with full attention and focus

1 page of plotted prespective (3 panels)

1 page of rough prespective (3 panels)

2 quarters of the rotated boxes exercise (15 boxes)

1 page of organic prepective (3 panels)

please remember to panel out and take your time on the revisions

Next Steps:

1 page of plotted prespective (3 panels)

1 page of rough prespective (3 panels)

2 quarters of the rotated boxes exercise (15 boxes)

1 page of organic prepective (3 panels)

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:40 PM, Friday August 11th 2023
edited at 2:43 PM, Aug 11th 2023

https://imgur.com/a/M3qi6Sh

Hi and thanks in advance for critiquing my revions have a great day.

edited at 2:43 PM, Aug 11th 2023
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