4:06 PM, Wednesday February 16th 2022
Hi!
I'm just another student on Lesson 1 with you. As a result, take my suggestion with a grain of salt.
Superimposed Lines
Each line's starting point appears to be excellent, with all the fraying being at the end of the line. One thing I noticed is that your lines (esp. the longer ones) deviate away from the original straight line too quickly. But, good work!
Ghosted Lines
You seem to be drawing from your elbow rather than your shoulder, and this is especially noticeable in the longer lines (note the curvature). But your lines are all smooth and confidently drawn! I can also see that you have read and taken the little advice given in the video (to not stop bluntly, but rather lift your pen when you reach the end point). Great!
Tables of Ellipses
Very nicely snug together! You've also gone over each ellipse twice, which, from the tutor feedback I am reading, is a good thing. It is something I personally need to work on!
Ellipses in Planes
I notice that your wider angle ellipses (80°-90°) are a little shakey (perhaps you're focusing more on touching the sides rather than smoothness). The rest look nice and smooth.
Funnels
Make sure the ellipses are tightly joined! One issue though: the minor axis needs to be aligned correctly (see https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/5/minoraxis). This axis must to go through the ellipse in a way that cuts it in two equal halves. Once you've worked on this, think about varying the degree of the ellipse. But first focus on getting that axis in the middle!
I am unable to remark on the rest of your work because I have yet to begin working on it. Keep up the fantastic work, though!