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10:53 PM, Saturday April 11th 2020

This is a big improvement, and you're well on the right track now. You'll certainly continue to improve as you get more practice with studying different kinds of animals, and your ability to identify the more nuanced, subtler details will also get better. But for now, I think you've shown a good deal of growth and that you understand the issues I was highlighting in my critiques.

I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

Next Steps:

Feel free to move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
11:04 PM, Saturday April 11th 2020

Thank you!

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