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3:59 PM, Friday October 2nd 2020

I just finished the challenge, so consider this a critique from a person on the same level as you. While your boxes are neat, the lines don't converge except for a few. Add line weight on only one corner. In a lot of boxes, the structure is wrong and the lines are lopsided in a lot of the places they shouldn't be. For example, box 234. Your line work is very neat but I'm afraid you haven't grasped the concept. I'd like you to go through the written content+ the video. The video explains very well how the lines converge. That's about it, I'd like to see some revisions.

That'll be all,

lemons_and_roses

Next Steps:

I want you to go through the written content and the video and then do 12 boxes. I hope you're able to grasp the concept.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:34 PM, Saturday October 3rd 2020

Hi lemons_and_roses,

thank you for your feedback. Please let me know if the latest upload has improved on the points that you outlined.

https://imgur.com/gallery/J9WZySk

Appreciate your time and comments.

3:43 AM, Sunday October 4th 2020

The aim is to make the boxes solid, in that case, you've improved. I guess that's all. Also, my work hasn't been critiqued yet, so maybe you could check it out.

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 2.

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