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10:10 AM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

Hi! So we have the same problem (both on this link, and the one in the sketchbook (they are, after all, the same link - the one to your profile, not your submission)). I'll recommend using https://imgbb.com/ instead.

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A working link, if you please

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3:50 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

Hi Benj

Sorry I really dont know what the heck Im doing.

Hope this one worked. Hopefully my Rough Perspective is

better than my computer knowledge

https://i.imgur.com/r4FlTd7.jpg.

Thanks for your patience.

7:40 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

Not a problem! The convergences have improved significantly, though the linework has taken a bit of a hit. The confidence itself is fine, but I notice that you'll sometimes reinforce a line, likely because it came out wrong the first time. This is not something we recommend. Each line is drawn once, and only once.

Next Steps:

That's not enough of an issue for me to hold you here though, and what I criticized has improved, so I'll move you on to the 250 box challenge. Best of luck!

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
10:58 PM, Wednesday July 14th 2021

Yay Thank you so much

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