I started the lessons some time ago (maybe around past autumn), but I didn't submit anything for review. I have recently joined the Patreon and decided to also do things the right way and post the homework :)
Some (I think most) of them have been redone so these actually show my current levels.
Looking forward!
Hi! Nice lines dude, great work.
I'll recommend you to ghost more your lines in the boxes exercises, somes lines look woobly.
In the organic perspective excercise try to do smaller and bigger boxes so we can tell wich boxes are far away or near us (the are some boxes that are almost equal in size through the guideline)
Good luck!
Next Steps:
Move on the next lesson but always being aware of ghost lines!
With next lesson I mean 250 boxes challenge haha :)
I actually already did it... I will redo maybe 50 after all the feedback... redoing all 250 might be too much...
Thanks for the feedback!
That's true, I didn't do the small to large scaling of the boxes in that one.
I did notice the wobbliness and I wonder if it's because of how I'm doing the strokes. When I'm ghosting I just don't see enough consistency. It might be because I'm not yet comfortable with drawing from my shoulder, and I think I do elbow strokes sometimes (maybe a mix which results in wobbly lines). Also, I'm not sure if it's bad habit or not to keep the pinkie on the paper to have some stability :) Maybe I'll ask this as a separate topic (and also search for an existing similar question).
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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