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5:40 PM, Friday May 29th 2020

One of my complaints is that you often tend to arc your lines a lot, including your extension lines. Keep your lines straight, especially the extension lines, so that you can identify your mistakes more accurately. Still prioritize getting your lines smooth though, as you have been doing so far. But overall, your boxes seem to have improved somewhat in terms of convergence, as if you are more comfortable with drawing lines that converge to any single vanishing point you choose instead of having them go off to infinity all the time.

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12:10 PM, Sunday May 31st 2020

I see what you mean by that ???? I just saw the the extension lines look curved. It is because the a4 paper is a little bit arched at the top and bottom end ???? my bad. Thanks for the critique ????

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11:17 PM, Sunday May 31st 2020

your curved lines are obviously caused by paper not lying flat when photograped. you can ignore that guy's critique about that. your boxes are crisp, lines are perfect, and convergences are well estimated. keep up the good work.

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move on to lesson 2

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