6:51 AM, Friday April 16th 2021
Thank you so much for your time and the critique, I appreciate it a lot.
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4:57 PM, Tuesday April 20th 2021
Hi. Before i go to mark "agree" with previous critique here are some small remarks from my side that was not mentioned in previous critique:
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in superimposed lines exercise it seems that in 2nd page for the longest straight lines was not used ruler for the initial lines,
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in ghosted planes exercise and in organic perspective exercise some lines do not have plotted dots that is important to do because ghosted lines technique (including plotting dots) is supposed to be used on every single mark you make through all of the Drawabox lessons https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/9/purpose
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in organic perspective exercise I noticed some corrected lines. Try to avoid correcting your initial confident lines. Let them be as they are and move on. Otherwise they stand out from the whole confident picture ;)
Nice submission!
Good luck in 250 box challenge!
5:20 PM, Tuesday April 20th 2021
Thank you for the feedback! I will try my best to take in the advice. Thank you for taking your time.
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