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2:23 AM, Thursday August 20th 2020
Hello JRFAN06! I'll look at your work to see if I have some critique to give you.
Lines
Aside from some occasionally wobbly and overlapping lines, You did a good job. The purpose of lesson 1 is be confident on your lines
Elippses
In this part i see alot of wobby lines, but thats okay,
Boxes
You did a great job, but
in rotated boxes, you drew the side box too far from your boxes
Overall
You did a good job!
Next Steps:
Just to do some warm up to, make your lines and elippses not wobbly, practice more using shoulder.
You're ready for the 250 boxes challenge!
1:17 AM, Sunday August 30th 2020
Thank you i appreciate you taking the time to critique.
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