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Titan521 in the post "OPTIONAL CHALLENGE: 250 Cylinders (#2)"

2015-09-20 19:35

So that motivation is a farce post inspired (kinda ironic) me to finally start the 250 cylinder challenge. Here are the first 25...am I getting these right?

http://m.imgur.com/WUgabjk

Titan521 in the post "250 Box Challenge (#2)"

2015-07-18 10:41

Okay...first 50 boxes, am I going about these right? :)

http://m.imgur.com/IX792O6,IiFUqRC

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2015-07-18 05:55

Damn, I was hoping I wouldn't have ro do those :D, .....well you don't get better overnight!

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2015-07-16 22:08

Are these any better?

http://m.imgur.com/QipXmIC,zDtllw4,FVLPrWH,BYi5Dyz,9tFAEN6,lAwgGIT,PRBbiAw

I redid the radish, cause I think I was too quick to jump into detail again, I think page 5, (the one with the pine tree ) is the worst, with the rest comparatively better......anyway I'll leave the critiquing to you :)

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2015-07-10 20:44

Sorry about the late response ( I tend to get lazy in the summer vacations, bit then who doesn't?)

Here's a couple of my drawings http://m.imgur.com/U94Bj1U,ukFub9u,1amuvOn,ENZU5sr,dZGFVv5,Z1vfLMH,xXuOXrU

I tried to pick out my own mistakes, so i noticed that I tend to draw really big, I also have trouble applying smaller details, they're still sketchy, though I think they' have gotten a bit better

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2015-06-30 12:05

So I'm having a hard time executing the lay ins of plants, because of which my drawings are looking flimsy and weak as I tried drawing them without any (the number one reason I'm not submitting them), I was hoping if you could give me an explanation of how they work especially for larger more complex subjects with more branches and leaves :)

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-15 16:19

Thanks for the critique man!, I knew there was something wrong with the way I was approaching this exercise but couldn't point it out myself, you just made it crystal clear! :)

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-14 11:32

So here are the organic forms with contours and what I think passes for dissections :p: http://m.imgur.com/SAYaShi,6PE49QV,AftYslZ,644xeFg

Thanks for the video!, It really helped me understand how these lines go around the object although I think I still need some practice before I'm able to execute the various degrees of the ellipses effectively.

As for my dissections well, I used photo references, but they're still very sketchy, and I guess poor :(, is it because I don't focus enough or something?

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-08 07:35

Okay then, I've done them before so it shouldn't take much time :)

Titan521 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-07 18:57

Hi, I'm fairly new to drawing, and i really like your lessons, Im looking to take drawing up as a hobby and it interests me alot because i never could do it very well :D but I'm willing to work hard if thats what it takes :)

I did this with a 0.4 pen ( couldn't find a 0.5 one)

Anyway here's my homework:

http://m.imgur.com/a/ZFX1J

I thought my dissections looked pretty much the same, but its my form intersections I'm really worried about

I would've submitted lesson 1 too, but I lost the sketchbook I did it on :p