Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"
2017-12-31 17:32
Okay here you go let me know what you think. I will incorporate the form intersection exercises regularly as that seems like something worthwhile to practice while thinking of blocking out major forms, thanks.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"
2017-12-29 08:06
Thank you so many realizations, I'm glad we're getting to the bottom of these issues. I forgot to take more than two progress shots but I hope you can see that I'm building this using the construction to scale method. All in ballpoint with no details. I didn't emphasize any lines yet, when you have the time can you do a quick drawthrough, where would you emphasize the lines? Appreciate it. https://m.imgur.com/a/AH2Af
Similar to reference (original lost on pinterest) https://i.pinimg.com/originals/79/dd/2d/79dd2dbc5d90f6552863acec987a32fc.jpg
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"
2017-12-28 07:25
Thanks for the feedback need to drill that advice into my head moving forward. Here are the additional drawings, I tried to show the constructional side of things let me know if its enough. https://m.imgur.com/a/7U0O3
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"
2017-12-24 23:50
Here is the HW. Tough lesson, an exercise on patience and control, need to work on a lot of things. To name a few, ellipses of course, initial box construction, and too many unnecessarymarks. I hope I'm progressing well enough I know these things improve over time. Thanks appreciate the feedback. https://m.imgur.com/a/Sr9mG
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"
2017-07-18 05:04
Hello there, here is lesson 6 for your review. Have learned a lot this lesson and will continue to practice from here on out. Just a matter of practice and not losing concentration, I feel like I skip over steps when I lose focus but later I see what I did wrong. I know the answer is to just practice more but I'm curious to know what stands out as my biggest weakness. What I have noticed is that my ellipses of course need a lot of work and that I make too many marks, self correcting in progress. Let me know what you think, thanks.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"
2017-05-25 06:04
Here you go I rewatched the video/notes. I think this is a bit better but still need to practice more. It definitely has to do with focusing on the subject more and studying the angles/relationships. Can you point out the best/worst example in this set, just so I know I am not completely missing an important concept, thanks.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"
2017-05-21 23:26
Hi there, here is lesson 5 for your review. Please let me know what I should be focusing on for the lesson ahead. Appreciate it.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"
2017-03-15 03:23
Thanks for the feedback, very valuable. Here are the additional construction insect drawings. Let me know if I should do more http://imgur.com/a/LqIzu
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"
2017-03-13 03:31
Here is lesson 4. I have been catching myself drawing many useless details and working on not doing that. Your thoughts would be helpful, thanks
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"
2017-03-05 18:06
Hi, here is my lesson 3 for your review, thanks. Http://imgur.com/a/Og9PC
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"
2017-02-20 19:43
Thanks for the concise feedback. I practiced the 'overshooting' technique and this was very helpful in realizing my mistakes. I will keep practicing these, please see my two pages... http://imgur.com/a/ouwjw
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"
2017-02-18 18:34
Hello, here is my post for lesson 2. I did some lessons over again, based on your last critique. Please let me know what I should be working on, thanks.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge"
2017-02-06 04:46
Here you go, thanks. Ellipses are a continuing work in progress for me and will continue to work on them as part of my drawing routine.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "250 Box Challenge"
2017-02-06 02:32
Here is the challenge for your review, appreciate your time.
Abel2TheMoon in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"
2018-01-02 15:27
This was a brush pen, which in hindsight I know should only be used for solid black areas, I messed that up. Also what do you think of the areas I chose to highlight. With the ballpoint pen would you add line weight by going over it once and leave it alone or go over the line (not necessarily the whole line) a couple times for thicker areas? Thanks.