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9:18 PM, Monday July 18th 2022
edited at 9:18 PM, Jul 18th 2022

Sorry about that. I thought you just updated the original album and didn't realize there was another submission. As Uncomfortable said please make sure to include a link to your revisions when you submit them on here.

So onto your revised pages. With the rotated box exercise I think everything I put in that inital critique pretty much holds true to what I'm seeing here. Your organic perspective exercises are looking pretty good. You seem to be comfortable using the ghosting method and drawing from your shoulder for confident linework which is great. Your box constructions are pretty wonky throughout. You have the correct understanding that box lines need to converge to vps and some of your constructions here are quite solid but there are also a lot of convergences here that definitely need improvement so the 250 box challenge will be a great way to practice this. I'm going to mark this as complete and you can move on to the 250 box challenge. Good luck!

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The 250 Box Challenge

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edited at 9:18 PM, Jul 18th 2022
11:05 AM, Thursday July 21st 2022

TAHNKS! :)

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