whatbykenn in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-09 05:05
Hallo! Got my lesson 3 work here. Let me know your critique. Thank you!
whatbykenn in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-04-26 17:42
Woo hoo! Thank you very much! I am so glad I passed this part and am super excited to start lesson 3.
I was worried about my textures but it looks like they came out better than I thought. I was also worried about relating forms to one another and honestly that was super tough for me.
This lesson was very challenging and I appreciate your feedback on it. I will work to keep my forms simple starting out going forward and practice these exercises as warmups to work on what my weak points were. Thanks again!
whatbykenn in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-04-25 20:43
I got lost again and posted public lol. Found it!
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whatbykenn in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-11 00:28
Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback and pass to move forward! Insects and arachnids should be challenging and enjoyable as well.
Some of the elements you're saying I need to work on, I totally agree with. I definitely struggled with overlapping lines to convey a single cohesive edge. The arrows, leaves, and branches exercises are something I can continue to use to push myself. I will really use the branches exercise to tackle that overlap issue and space out my ellipses.
And I really appreciate the shout out for my cactus! I think from your course, I consider a totally different approach to conveying texture so I'm glad its showing.
And those mangoes, I don't know. I think I was practicing using minimal contours/lines ( I think I saw you do that somewhere) but looking back on it now, it totally breaks the illusion haha. Should have reviewed how that really looked.
Again thank you!