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SunnyAslan in the post "We never stop learning. Here's me struggling to do an elephant drawing demo for a student. It didn't go as planned."

2017-02-24 17:40

Camels are similar. Digitigrades with giant food pads.

SunnyAslan in the post "We never stop learning. Here's me struggling to do an elephant drawing demo for a student. It didn't go as planned."

2017-02-24 16:28

Elephants trunks go all the way to the ground when relaxed. That might be related to your head size mistake, but I also think the elephant is too tall/compact and its midsection is too small, just take a look at this reference. Also, the junk in the trunk doesn't really reflect how elephants are built. They have more saggy mom jeans behinds. Their hip joint is further back than you think.

SunnyAslan in the post "We never stop learning. Here's me struggling to do an elephant drawing demo for a student. It didn't go as planned."

2017-02-24 05:22

Do you mind if I point out some additional critique? I know it is just a sketch :).