SunlightDynasty in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-08-07 13:03

Hi, here is my lesson 4: https://imgur.com/a/jackNTT

Thank you in advance for your critique!

SunlightDynasty in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-22 20:43

Hello, here is my lesson 3: https://imgur.com/a/HNIHiEf

It definitely feels like I need more practice with branches and flow of leaves and petals, they turned out pretty stiff.

Thanks in advance for your feedback!

SunlightDynasty in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-07 17:00

Hi, here is my Lesson 2: https://imgur.com/a/Vl42dBU

After working on the lessons, it seems to me that the tips of my pens deteriorate too quickly. Instead of roundness, they become more like cones. I understand that the pressure on the pen is most likely the issue, but when I'm trying to press more weakly (when the tip barely touches the paper), the lines become very unstable and the pen sometimes does not even touch the paper. I will try to control pressure, but Im wondering if there can be other factors affecting tip wear: speed,pen grip, angle of holding the pen to the surface? Many thanks in advance for the answer.