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starfries in the post "LESSON 4: Drawing Insects, Arachnids and Other Creepy Crawlies"

2014-12-14 04:17

Thank you! I'm really glad you mentioned the detail thing. I noticed something was going wrong in those complex areas but I wasn't sure what and I don't want to self-critique too much when submitting. Besides this practice, is there an exercise I can do to work on proportion?

starfries in the post "LESSON 4: Drawing Insects, Arachnids and Other Creepy Crawlies"

2014-12-13 11:28

Here's mine: http://imgur.com/a/LsYX7

If you have time, I wouldn't mind seeing an example of how you'd draw the hairy spider someone else posted because I wouldn't know where to start with that!

starfries in the post "LESSON 3: Drawing Plants"

2014-12-12 03:23

I admire your commitment =)

starfries in the post "LESSON 3: Drawing Plants"

2014-12-10 07:58

Okay, I think I get it now! Instead of jumping right from lay-in to drawing I tried to build up the complexity a little at a time, adding more and more detail to the lay-in until it turned into a drawing.

http://imgur.com/a/t0Lig

The first two pages are dressed-up lay-ins and the last two are my plants.

starfries in the post "LESSON 3: Drawing Plants"

2014-12-07 04:43

Lesson 3

I think I'm doing something wrong but I decided to go ahead and finish anyways so I can get more feedback. It feels like my lay-ins are too simple and stiff compared to everyone else's. I'm also struggling with jumping from lay-in to drawing. It's like I panic when faced with so much complexity and I don't know which parts to draw and which parts to leave out.

starfries in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2014-12-03 04:50

... hey!

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but really, it's been super helpful (even if you weren't sure it would work ಠ_ಠ). I'm only halfway through the 250 but I've produced some really sexy cubes on the last page and I'm starting to get a feel for where the vanishing points should go without placing a finger there or drawing them out.

starfries in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2014-12-03 03:46

Yay, thanks! I took a break to work on the box exercise after two pages of intersections so I'm glad it paid off.

starfries in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2014-12-01 21:11

http://imgur.com/a/4iyMM

Tough exercise! I never thought I'd have to do so much thinking for art.

starfries in the post "Announcement: What would you want out of a dedicated ArtFundamentals website?"

2014-11-24 16:30

I have a couple of ideas!

I also want to let you know what I like about your current system, so you can keep some of this stuff in mind as you move forward:

starfries in the post "OPTIONAL CHALLENGE: 250 Boxes"

2014-11-20 20:50

Is it okay to vary the line weights by going over the lines again? I'm having trouble changing them with pressure alone - even really light pressure looks about the same as heavy pressure with my pen.