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Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-13 08:51

submission 4+

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Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-13 08:40

submission 4+

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-11 12:44

Strangely, my last attempt to submit submission 4 doesn't seem to be visible.

submission 4

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-11 08:14

submission 4

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-24 06:54

submission 3++++

You've asked me about the lesson 1/2 exercises in the past, so I've also attached a selection of practice pages for lesson 1/2. (They aren't in chronological or any other particular order.)

I had a question about the 25 textures challenge. It seems to me to be unique in the challenges in that it essentially boils down to "do 8 1/3 pages of an exercise that's discussed in another lesson." Since there aren't challenges for 8 pages of rotated boxes or 8 pages of ghosted lines, can I ask about how this fits into the lessons and if it's something I should pursue?

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-05 18:24

Thank you for the critique. I have been doing the planes exercise regularly, and I did most of the other exercises at least occasionally, but did not work on the texture analyses/dissections. I will revisit this earlier material to identify my deficiencies.

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-04 22:51

Here is what I have now.

submission 3+++

Here are the references I used.

http://www.treeremovalbycir.com/images/cir_animacion_1.jpg

https://previews.123rf.com/images/shanin/shanin1806/shanin180600365/103036185-blooming-prickly-pear-or-paddle-cactus-with-yellow-flowers.jpg

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-01 05:08

submission 3++

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-29 01:39

, that is over 1400 words plus links and custom drawings

normally i don't add my own comments to my submissions. i don't add them in the interest of respecting your thoughts that i am not equipped to judge my own drawings. i believe that judging my own drawings is counterproductive when my goal is to meet the requirements laid out in the lesson.

but i wanted to bring up one point. i really feel like i do not understand lesson 2's textures in any substantial way. i feel like i understand the forms, organic forms, straight lines, ellipses, and rotating boxes in a way that texture eludes me. you have stressed that texture is not the focus of the lessons you write, so how bad is this really? you have written about my texture here as well, but the exact way to improve upon what i have previously done escapes me

by the way, i used this photo reference for this drawing you drew special attention to. the veins in my drawing do seem at second glance to more closely resemble the local colour instead of a shadow.

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-28 05:08

submission 3+

Rox8Master in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-24 02:53

submission 3

Rox8Master in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-02-22 04:14

submission boxes