poodle_attack in the post "looking for feed back, mainly how to start off this draw with proper perspective for the final version, something here just isnt working, i sont want to lower the camera angle since i want to show the aftermath of the chaos, but the staging isnt solid and i feel its a bit hard to read."

2022-08-08 17:42

also this is foe a manga so its a bit too cluttered a page, could also use help condensing this page a bit. i already combined panel 2 and 4 in the final drawing