looking for feed back, mainly how to start off this draw with proper perspective for the final version, something here just isnt working, i sont want to lower the camera angle since i want to show the aftermath of the chaos, but the staging isnt solid and i feel its a bit hard to read.
also this is foe a manga so its a bit too cluttered a page, could also use help condensing this page a bit. i already combined panel 2 and 4 in the final drawing
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poodle_attack
2022-08-08 17:42
also this is foe a manga so its a bit too cluttered a page, could also use help condensing this page a bit. i already combined panel 2 and 4 in the final drawing
Uncomfortable
2022-08-08 18:37
This subreddit is reserved for those working through the lessons on drawabox.com, as explained here. While I don't know too much about the comic-art side of reddit and can't recommend anything on that front, more general subreddits that may be better suited to a post like this include /r/learnart, /r/learntodraw, and /r/artistlounge.