nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-10-18 19:25

okey perfect.Thanks again for the reply and the quick tips

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-10-18 17:33

hi again! sorry i couldnt answer faster.

thanks for the detailed review, and for the congratulations

as for the redoo of the animals, what type of animals should i choose (hooved non hooved), should i do the donkey demo before the other ones?

Thanks for the advice too, i was asking because the school was specific and told me they gave me the chance to go but i had to know it is going to be harder for me as my drawing skills are not that good as the rest of my classmates.

so what you recomend is i do this course along with what i like to draw? or can i do other courses as proko along with this one

thanks again and sorry if im asking too much

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-10-16 05:18

https://imgur.com/gallery/mKUwH33

Hi uncomfortable

Here is my lesson 5

I had a hard time with understanding proportion although I know it wasnt the main focus

I also had a very hard time trying to give texture and line weight as I tried using a brush pen so I dont waste the pen but I think it didnt work out as it covers most of the and couldnt give texture with it

I also wanted to ask (as i have been accepted to FZD school of design by the condition that I pracitce much more drawing ) If there is something complementary I should do.Maybe i can do the cylinder challenge along with this lesson

And thanks,without this page I wouldnt have entered the school so Im truly greatfull

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-02 20:11

Okey. Got it

Thanks!

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-02 19:57

thanks for the lesson and sorry i couldnt respond earlier. as for the shaky lines i ended up noticing that at the end and i had a doubt when making circles and ovals, should i keep tracing the same circle 3 times as in the begginig or with one is enough?

thanks

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-20 21:04

https://imgur.com/a/csLQItW

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here is my lesson

this time i include the practice i make before tackling the final attempt i dont know if thats ok

I also wanted to ask if i should pay more attention to your strokes and try imitating or if i should pay more attention to the reference

thanks

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-07 21:14

thanks for the critique uncomfortable. I appreciate it. and i know understand what you are saying

i will start right away

thanks

nahuel

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-05 20:58

oh sorry i forgot i just moved up to the $10 tier and higher. i dont know if you recive a notification or somthing.

sorry again

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-05 20:29

here is my lesson 3

https://imgur.com/a/Hb3tS2a

as you told me in the last lesson i tried to give more distance in the arrows so that it has a little more perspective

as for the branches i made like a lot of them , i had a hard time matching the lines i did in the method you said we should use,i tried to continue the line past the cylinder and half to the other one, i dont know if i explain myself .But i found it easier to just make one continous stroke taking 3 or 4 cylinders, the branches i submited are made with the method of the class i just had that doubt if maybe i was making to many cylinders or if it is better to make continous strokes

another problem is that i tried to touch every cylinder and some of my branches look stiff ,like they dont have the flow hat they should.Should i take more liberty with the cylinders? or is it the strokes im making the problem? i think in a few of the brenches i wait for the stroke to touch the cilynder to make the curve

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and for the plants i have problems making little cylinders with the elbow and shooulder just asking if i can make them whith my wrist?

and for last i think some of the texture plants dont show some of my mistakes in the construction.

thanks and sorry for the long messege

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-21 20:23

hi uncomfortable

thanks for the answer and help.sorry for not subbmiting the hole lesson and as for the texture analysis i was doing the excersieses before the reconfiguration of the page and the new exercises and if i remember correctly the previus lesson didnt ask for those studies.

thanks again for the help i will try my best with the next leeson, and practice drawing more cubes

nahuel4 in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-21 18:11

hey here is the second leeson.I already submited the lesson but i was told to redo this exercises again

https://imgur.com/a/qHqAfrz