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FallenRapture in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-07-18 23:39

Here is another page of organic intersections! This one feels better than the other two. So here's the link!

FallenRapture in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-07-16 06:20

Hello Uncomfortable,

I've redone lesson 2 as requested after having completed the 250 box challenge. I hope I've improved myself since the last time I posted here! Thank you for your critiques and here is the link!!

Have a good day.

Oh, the texture study was something I saw DavidMelhart did and thought it'd be a good exercise to do. I think it helped with my textures, but I really tried to get them to wrap around the form this time. Again thanks!

FallenRapture in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2016-07-14 15:39

I completed the 250 box challenge. I started off rather rough as you can most likely see. It was hard to break my sketchy, fix issues real quick reflex, but I think it's gotten better by the end of this challenge.

Some of the fix lines are kind of hard to see. The only different colored pen I had around was a purple pen. Sorry about that.

Also a good patience teacher for me. Thanks for getting on me about it. Really did help me rethink through my work ethic. I'm pounding away through lesson 2, but might be a little bit before I'm done. Here's the link! and thanks again!

FallenRapture in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-07-05 21:24

I am sorry I posted this before I finished the 250 box challenge. I am in the process of finishing that (200ish done), but I did all of this before even starting the challenge so I have no problem redoing it. I will read more closely into all that is said. Again, terribly sorry for the premature post. I meant no disrespect. Thank you for your critiques.

FallenRapture in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-07-05 19:22

Hey Uncomfortable,

This is a quick turnaround for lesson 2, and I'll be honest...I worked on this soon after finishing lesson 1 even though I hadn't submitted it. I finished lesson 1 a week and a half into June, but couldn't submit it so that's why I forged on. Just thought I'd explain the quick turnaround.

I struggled a bit with the texture/cross section portion, but I am going to be doing a more in depth study of those. I misunderstood what you wanted with the arrows, so that's why there's two pages of just single, large arrows. I corrected it afterwards after seeing some other posts. I have a question about pens? I bought a set of pens with different tips (0.05mm - 0.8mm). Should I use them all or stick to one? I usually try to stick to one pen, but the for reinforcing lines I generally pick up the 0.5mm. Just thought I'd ask!

I liked the blob drawing...it is rather relaxing...I drew a lot of blobs...

Anywho, I'll stop rambling. Here's my Homework!