ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-19 19:12
Oh, also, unrelatedly -- for the challenges, are they something I decide to do on my own, or will you at some point direct me to them like you did with the 250 boxes?
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-19 18:58
Thank you for the feedback! I'm super excited to go on to animals, and I will definitely try to keep to simpler forms for construction and quality over quantity my textures.
As far as building up from simple forms, what is the correct way to do the beetle horn? Should the horn have been a curved cone first, an organic form, built like a branch, or something else entirely?
Similarly with the treehopper, do you have any advice on what underlying construction would have been right for that end shape?
Thank you for running this!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-18 17:56
Hihi!
Here's my lesson 4!
I royally fucked up the shadows, but I think most of it looks pretty good? I also have yet to figure out fur, but I think that's next lesson anyway.
Here's looking forward to your feedback!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-08 19:02
Sounds good!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-03 01:38
Thank you very much for the detailed feedback!
I'm on to lesson 4! If I have another page of arrows/another attempt at the maple leaf, should I submit it here, or on the subreddit?
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-27 03:31
Hello hello!
Here's lesson 3: https://imgur.com/a/7Buu4z5!
I feel like my quality is pretty variable in this lesson -- My plant constructions and leaves range from pretty good to terrible, while my branches are mostly awful. Although they're getting better near the end, I guess?
But we're not supposed to just grind away at the exercises, so here I go. I very much look forward to your feedback!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-01 20:36
Thank you!!
Lesson 3, here I come!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-01 17:06
Hi Uncomfortable,
My lesson 2 submission is here: https://imgur.com/a/Uiw5Kvv
Thanks for running this!
ebly_dablis in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-20 06:25
Sweet, thank you!