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DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-08-20 20:36

Thanks a lot for the review!

Regarding faint lines used to block out the forms I'll keep that in mind for the following assignments, I actually thought it was part of the process as I saw in the demos you provide you seem to use as well fainter lines (for example in the cricket and the spider construction demos here : https://drawabox.com/lesson/4/7 )

Again, thanks a bunch for what you do! Cheers! :)

DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-08-18 11:52

Hello there! Here's my lesson 4 assignment : https://imgur.com/a/uSS0lt5

I couldn't wait for this assignment as I do love insects! I feel that I improved substantially since lesson 3, and that I'm way less hesitant about my linework (except these damn tiny sausages...).

Also having a side drawing pad to keep some notes, do intermediate drawings to get to know the anatomy of the bugs I got to draw came to be really useful. I'm sure there is much room for improvement and I can't wait to read your critique.

Cheers!

DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-21 19:22

Thanks a bunch for the feedback, I'll definitely adapt my strategy moving on so as to concentrate on the important things!

Cheers, Duom.

DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-17 20:06

Hello there ! I took a bit of time with this one, but here is my homework for assignment 3: https://imgur.com/a/o1JeID7 Still tyring to strike the right balance between too little and too much texturing but I'm feeling good about the last 3 plants of the set.

Just upgraded from 7 to 15$ pledge a couple of days ago, I hope it's not too soon to post (if not I can repost in august). Have a nice one, cheers!

DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-03 15:17

Thank you for the feedback ! :)

DuomDraw in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-01 21:54

Hey /u/Uncomfortable ! Here are my exercises for lesson 2 ! https://imgur.com/a/XD5BhhV

It was way more challenging than I first thought, I still feel that my freehand ellipses need more work. Had some fun with the textures and I tried a different approach for the second page of the dissections as I felt I had too many large black / busy areas on the dissections of the first page.

Thanks a bunch for what you do! Cheers ! :)