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Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-25 18:45

I've done the few extra pages.

https://imgur.com/a/mtKVZkK

I focus this time on construction ( like we're suppose to do ) and I've kept in mind to adding masses instead of flat shapes. One thing that help me seeing in 3d is to adding shadow of the body when it is only sphere and sausage. It is easier to place the legs that way.

I already see some mistake in the first hybrids ( the left arm/wing was misplace ) and I'm not proud of the third, the head was too small, but it was really fun.

At last, snake are very useful to understand the sausage method. If I could start again, I'll read your lesson more carefuly and begin with some snake.

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-24 13:58

Here is my lesson 5:

https://imgur.com/a/lpk1fw7

The drawing are still in chronogical order ( I saw at the end the sausage exercice )

fun fact: Someone I didn't know saw me drawing and buy me the one with the firebug from the insect lesson \o/ One month of drawabox for free!

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-05 18:23

Thank you for your review,

Indeed, I mess up the head of the grasshopper and it bother me for the rest of the drawing.

See you in lesson 5 ! ;)

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-05 13:48

Here is my result on the lesson 4 for review:

https://imgur.com/a/NViQSd1

Thank you

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-20 16:53

Thank you for your feedback,

I totally see what you mean when you talk about how loose and scratchy my lines can be. I use to draw only by observation, but i'm here to learn constructional drawing and i'm fighting these bad habits. I'll try to keep in mind the ghosting method, not amplify the complexity of an exercice, to take time and to think before each stroke instead of thinking on the page, as you said.

See you in lesson 4 ;)

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-19 13:00

Hi,

Lesson 3 ready for review:

https://imgur.com/a/dWVaXc8

Thank you !

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-07 14:00

Thanks for the return, I'll keep your advices in mind for lesson 3 and texture challenge.

Cabunicum in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-06-04 09:29

Hello!

Here is my homework for the lesson 2:

https://imgur.com/a/6Bq9Xm9

I just realize that my texture analysis is in french. If you need me to translate, I'll do it.

Cabunicum in the post "250 Box Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-21 21:02

Glad it's over, here is my 250 boxes:

https://imgur.com/a/Gw3bgqk