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burmah in the post "250 Box Challenge (#2)"

2015-08-06 17:01

I'm so sorry I missed that memo. That being said, I'd be happy to make a donation to continue critiques. I can't afford a whole lot right now, but I can definitely send a little your way.

Thanks!

burmah in the post "250 Box Challenge (#2)"

2015-08-05 19:26

I tried to take your suggestion from Lesson 1 and focus on ghosting lines and building confidence. It definitely starts out rough. As I neared 250, I felt like I hadn't really spent enough time with it, so I went all the way to 390.

Oh, I also moved and got myself into a predicament (i.e., house wasn't ready so I'm living on the fly right now), so I didn't have any of my pens. I grabbed pens from work (ha), which included a red ballpoint pen and a black felt tip pen. Eventually, I moved in and found my Microns, so the final 30 are with drawn with a 05.

Here's the link.

burmah in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (version 2)"

2015-07-30 22:45

Thank you for the feedback.

I definitely got ahead of myself and didn't read the instructions as thoroughly as I should've. I think I just went based off the example for the super-imposed lines homework. I'll be sure to read the instructions more carefully in the future.

As for ellipses, I definitely see what you're talking about. My instinct is to work from my wrist, so it feels like I always remember the moment the ellipse gets narrower at the top. That's when I typically course correct and use my full arm, which results in several 'go-rounds'. I need to start from the shoulder from the get-go.

Lastly, the ghosting lines exercise is one I definitely need to take more time with. I'm going to do the 250 box challenge before heading to Lesson 2.

Thanks again!

burmah in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (version 2)"

2015-07-29 16:28

Here's my homework for Lesson 1.

Thanks for doing this, btw!