Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-12 17:52
Hi again thanks for the i dept feedback,
here is the 4 pages of insect drawings you requested i'd do/re-do
https://photos.app.goo.gl/DbVx6zBb4UjvK1Qq9
I tried to keep these things in mind when working on these (basically a summery of your comment)
-Don't work subtractively (no guide ellipses or circle for shapes)
-work on consistency with sausages and contour curves
-Don't over do Contour curves for a single shape.
-Take more time (and care) on each drawing/page, and look more often at reference.
-Avoid using stretched spheres for the legs.
(what i added myself tying into drawing the black widows abdomen)
-Don't overthink things and keep it simple
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-10 19:15
Hi, here is my lesson 4:https://photos.app.goo.gl/8PDemufFPdGWNwwL7
Thanks again for your time!
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-07 19:17
Once again thanks for the in dept analysis it helps allot!
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-07 18:37
i have created a new link here: https://photos.app.goo.gl/vwvCH5nGAvTD9Eui9
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-07 13:27
Hi here is my lesson 3 submission: https://photos.google.com/album/AF1QipMwniDSot72f55r0i9JF9q7TXcJlY0uDulQTzlH
Thank you for your time.
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-11 19:13
Hey, thank you again for the in dept analysis and critique, i felt like my ellipses or anything organic in general i struggled with the most so i went ahead and did the cylinder challenge early to practice what i seem to have trouble with the most.
once again thanks for the time!
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-06-10 21:01
Hi, here is my 250 cylinders.
https://photos.app.goo.gl/xN4RSrjvMiSjWQ4k7
Thank you for your time and critique!
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-05-27 15:52
Hi again, Thank you for the in dept feedback it helps me a bunch :), as requested i have redone the organic forms with contour curves and focused on the outlines as much as i could (took me a few pages to adjust my habbits), let me know if there is anything!
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-05-26 09:24
Hi i've completed lesson 2
Arnie_Xeroz in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-12 23:17
thanks ill work on these things you mentioned, however the missing leg wasn't a mistake, the reference actually missed a leg.
https://photos.app.goo.gl/X1yhsJVUjdaS2UWy6