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9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2017-08-04 18:04

Hi, here's my submission for Lesson 5: https://imgur.com/a/tQTP5

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-07-27 14:18

Hi, sorry for the delay. Here's my try at the wasp again: https://imgur.com/a/Qoh9m

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-07-09 16:51

Hi, hopefully this is better. Here's my step-by-step: https://imgur.com/a/iHxSQ

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-07-06 08:46

Hi, thanks so much for the critique. Here's the four pages: https://imgur.com/a/RvkmZ

I sort of messed up the wasp's legs and tried to mask it, but it definitely came out worse for it. The legs in general still gave me a lot of trouble and I found it hard to make them flow, especially with my pages of discarded spider drawings.

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-06-27 07:02

Hi, here's my lesson 4 homework: https://imgur.com/a/jHwpy

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2017-06-09 15:15

Hi, here's another 4 pages: https://imgur.com/a/eo35H

I focused on leaves so hopefully my leaves convey a 3D sense now.

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2017-06-07 11:24

Hi, here's my 4 pages: https://imgur.com/a/v6NPK

I'm still finding it pretty difficult to construct leaves, especially when they start getting hectic and overlap each other

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2017-06-01 16:03

Hi, here's my lesson 3 homework: https://imgur.com/a/SNtaK

I've been practicing lesson 1 and 2 exercises so hopefully my lines turned out better this time (still keep messing up with ellipses though when I draw through them)

Hopefully I'm not submitting too fast, please let me know if I am. I increased my pledge to help mitigate that a little.

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-05-23 12:11

Hi, sorry for the delay. Here's the assignment: https://imgur.com/a/JQmei

I sort of went through the box challenge again after starting and failing the box only form intersections a dozen times but I still end up making mistakes most of the time, especially with drawing through forms

9jskim3 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-04-28 19:56

Hi, here's my lesson 2 homework: https://imgur.com/a/FXs1W

I spent hours trying to understand how intersection works while drawing boxes and I still can't really tell how it works. It's hard for me to distinguish dominant forms. Also, sorry if my tubes are too long, I just realized that mistake.

9jskim3 in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-04-27 22:43

Thanks for the feedback. I think I get it now thanks to the example you posted.

9jskim3 in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-04-27 15:11

Hi, here's my second attempt: https://imgur.com/a/0AFmY

I'm still a bit confused about the three sets of four parallel lines converging on its vanishing point, since when I tried it, it made my boxes look very lopsided. I watched your video on boxes again and I can't really seem to tell the difference between converging parallel lines and actual parallel lines with the vanishing point so far away.

Thanks for all your help

9jskim3 in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-04-26 03:04

Hi, here's my 250 boxes: https://imgur.com/a/izH55

I think imgur messed up the aspect ratio in the album but it turns normal if you click on it

I'm still not used to ghosting lines, I always end up making the lines wobbly if I go slowly or curve and overshoot when I go too fast, and I can't seem to find the middle ground