Here's some exemplary work that I've seen over the past four months
https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/5lnt8x/heres_some_exemplary_work_that_ive_seen_over_the/
2017-01-02 21:42
Uncomfortable
Hey folks!
So in a rather sloppy fashion, I've been noting down some homework submissions that stood out amongst the rest as being particularly exemplary, and I figured that since we've just entered a new year, it'd be a good time to share them with you all.
Before you look through them, and start judging your own work by this standard, keep in mind that we all start at different levels. Not everyone comes to us a complete beginner, and everyone has had entirely different experiences when it comes to the development of their drawing skills.
Oh, and this definitely isn't all of the great work I've seen - it's just the ones that I bothered to note down! Anyways, without further ado:
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/u/LifeInTechnicolorI's Lesson 1 submission (album) was particularly well executed, and was done so with patience and care, focusing on what they were doing that moment, with no sign of rushing.
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/u/Scrapper550's attempt at Lesson 1 (album) was brimming with confidence, and while there was certainly room for growth, considerable improvement had clearly occurred over the set already.
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/u/Zofferro's Lesson 3 (album) managed to capture a remarkable balance between reasonably solid construction and an intensely organic spirit.
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/u/odicay's Lesson 2 submission (album) demonstrated a strong understanding of 3D space, along well developed observational skills.
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/u/smashedpixie's work for Lesson 7 (album) was remarkable in its thoughtful and conservative use of line and its highly effective application of line weight to convey solid forms and lead the viewer's eye.
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/u/Fish_Face_Faeces was one of the few to conquer the 25 texture challenge (album), and did so with a wide variety of textures, tackling each one with care, focus and patience. On the left side, the ability to observe and transfer a massive amount of visual information was demonstrated, and on the right, the ability to organize it so as to avoid any unwanted distraction while continuing to convey and communicate with intent.
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/u/Uncompleted's Lesson 7 (album) was shaky at times, but showed a developing sense of space and construction, and ended on a remarkable high note with an impressive Formula 1 race car.
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/u/okshim's work on Lesson 2 (album) shows a well developing sense of form, and careful attention to detail.
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/u/NvBlaze's recent 250 box challenge submission (album) shows a developing understanding of how forms sit in space, along with a good (if a slightly heavy handed) grasp on the use of line weight.
There's really just one quality that I've seen in the most successful of my students here, and that's patience. Patience with one's self, to move forwards at one's own pace, patience with the work itself which can be quite tedious and time consuming, and patience with the instructions - taking the time to read and reread and properly digest all of the information that is packed perhaps too densely into these lessons. So if there's one new years resolution you should add to your list - be more patient.
RUItalianMan
2017-01-02 22:42
Looking forward to subscribing to your site and getting a start on drawing this year. Thanks for all you do man, and thanks to all the folks that give feedback and make this sub an awesome community.
Uncomfortable
2017-01-02 22:43
I'm glad to help - and those who contribute to this subreddit for no benefit to themselves are absolutely the true heroes here.
RUItalianMan
2017-01-10 06:52
Started lesson one today - really enjoyed it. Proud of the time I spent on it, even though it's nowhere near perfect. Gonna subscribe and submit to you in a few days when I finish - thanks again, man.
[deleted]
2017-01-03 00:32
Came here through that recent AskReddit post. Skimmed through lesson one, and searched through the subreddit a little bit, and I'm really liking what I see. I jolly well believe I'm gonna go get some felt tip pens and some printer paper tomorrow and throw myself at this, and maybe in a year or so I'll have something to show off proudly. I really appreciate the effort you've put into this whole ordeal as well, so prepare your wallet.
yuumei_sukanito
2017-01-03 04:37
Found this through an AskReddit post, man your tutorials are awesome! I've spent a couple of hours doing your first lessons and I'm already seeing improvements!
[deleted]
2017-01-03 07:09
Thank you for all that you do in this community.
yuumei_sukanito
2017-01-03 23:17
Hey u/Uncomfortable , you recommend not using pencil, so what pens do you recommend?
Uncomfortable
2017-01-03 23:42
Each lesson has its own particular recommendations/requirements, listed in its homework section(s). For lessons 1-7 I recommend the use of fineliners/felt tip pens, 0.5mm in thickness. In those homework sections I've got a picture of the two brands I use (staedtler pigment liners and faber castell pitt artist pens), but there's all kinds of brands out there of varying quality and price.
yuumei_sukanito
2017-01-03 23:53
Okay, thanks! I know I'm not supposed to ask without pledging to the patreon, so I'll do that soon.
yuumei_sukanito
2017-01-04 00:12
Do you I'll still be fine if I use pencil? I don't have any pens with me right now, and I live 30 minutes away from the nearest art store.
Uncomfortable
2017-01-04 00:57
Even ballpoint pen would be preferable to pencil, but pencil's better than nothing. It's not a question of being fine or not - it's about what ink brings to the table as a learning tool. Though keep in mind that if you want to submit work for me to critique personally (the whole patreon thing), those recommendations become requirements. If you're just submitting to the subreddit for the free community critiques, things are a little more relaxed.
perlatus
2017-01-03 23:49
I'm not /u/Uncomfortable, but here's the part of lesson 1 that mentions the pens: http://drawabox.com/lesson/1#headingThree1 (click "Homework" at the top)
klexos_art
2017-01-05 08:53
Thank you for all the time you put into this community! The genuine care and attention you give is always heartening!
pixiesgreene
2017-01-17 04:51
Thanks for your words about patience. I just attempted the rotated boxes exercise and found myself exactly the opposite, getting frustrated and impatient! I'm pretty happy with my first go but can see now it'll improve next time if I just take a breath, calm down and focus.
Uncomfortable
2017-01-17 15:07
For the rotated boxes exercise and the organic perspective boxes, it's not really expected that you'd do it perfectly the first time around. All you need to do is make sure you read and follow the instructions closely. Keep in mind that I haven't yet actually instructed you on how to deal with the particular challenges of rotating boxes freely in 3D space - these two exercises are included here early so that you can acquaint yourself with those challenges before having them explained, so the explanations are received with a little bit of context.
Just give your best effort for those two, then move onto the 250 box challenge where you'll find more resources on that particular topic. The tip there about drawing through your forms is especially important, as it helps one to better grasp how a box sits in 3D space.
Uncomfortable
2017-01-02 22:43
Here's to hoping it keeps getting better.