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VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-05 15:07

Hi Uncomfortable,

I did additional pages as you asked. Hope I got the gist of it. If you need the head I drew without any details I can provide a photo.

Album: https://imgur.com/a/erZz4LN

Drawings are in chronological order.

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-05-09 21:20

Hello Uncomfortable,

Submitting Lesson 5 drawings. All of the drawings are sorted chronologically - both submission and test/failed attempts (except organic intersections - those were last). Looking forward to your critique. Please be as honest as possible.

Album: https://imgur.com/a/ds4Tj4Y

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2019-02-13 20:40

Hello again Uncomfortable,

I did extra pages you've asked for. Insects are sorted chronologically, organic intersections not. I've added 2 more additional I'm not so confident about. In case I'm still missing the point I'm open to do more of them.

I've included reference images.

https://imgur.com/a/CMaqTaQ

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2019-01-31 19:36

Hello Uncomfortable,

I'd like to submit my homework for evaluation. I included my reference images. If you won't need them in the future, tell me - I'll be happy to comply and not include them.

I tried to set the drawings in chronological order (edit: excluding last one) but obviously I did the demo insects/arachnids first. I did them to the best of my abilities.

Looking forward to your opinion.

Link: https://imgur.com/a/C8nkdno

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2019-01-17 20:07

Hello Uncomfortable,

I went through lesson 3 and did some homework along the way. I've posted 9 plants. I thought it would be good to include an extra one cause I wasn't sure if I didn't focus too much on detail. If you wish for references I've used I have them "ready-to-post" so if you wish to compare please let me know.

I used pocket brush pen you recommended to fill some shadows, still mastering using it so I apologize for excessive ink.

Looking forward to your opinion on my work.

Link: https://imgur.com/a/L9TFGnb (plants are not uploaded chronologically)

Edit: I've added new branches page to include forking a branch (and is newest chronologically).

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-12-20 22:42

Hello again boss,

Let me explain myself a bit:

Link to album with additional pages: https://imgur.com/a/mMcrWQW

If you think I need to work on something even more before advancing I'd gladly spend even more time mastering it.

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-12-14 22:18

Hey boss,

Posting some more pages. Looking forward to your critique.

Edit: won't do that anymore :)

https://imgur.com/a/FJo4HpT

VikeriSyndrome in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-10-25 20:47

Thanks for the feedback. I did use line weight to hide my mistakes. I'm trying to avoid doing this as much as I can. By freely rotated boxes do you mean organic perspective, rotated boxes, just random boxes as in 250 challenge or all of them?

VikeriSyndrome in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-10-25 17:20

Hello Boss. Linkin' my 250 boxes. Took me some time to do them. Shading was partly done using elbow (for a test) but mostly using shoulder - that's why they might be different. Exercise is hard and time consuming but worth it. I've scanned the pages so every flaw will be visible. Looking forward to your bashing.

https://imgur.com/a/cnnI8Qr

VikeriSyndrome in the post "Check out this YouTuber as he goes through the Drawabox exercises - he's got a lot of great advice to offer as he details his own experiences. This is exactly the kind of content I want to encourage and spread!"

2018-08-25 11:20

Finally a lefty I can relate to.