twrn in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-08 20:07

That's great feedback. Thank-you for your time.

I was going to mention the darkened lines on the form intersections as a problem. I was trying to pull out the correct form by emphasizing my lines and when I looked back at it, the line quality was horrible even though the initial line was pretty good.

I also lost some control of the contrast in the dissections because I was a bit heavy handed with the line weights there as well.

twrn in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-06-07 23:44

Here's my work for lesson 2. As everyone else agrees, this was a bit tougher. The form intersections got a bit complex and my shading on one or two of the pages isn't very good. I also noted one of my major mistakes on the form intersections. Thanks for any feedback:

[Lesson 2 images] (http://imgur.com/a/81cVV)