I'm just going to pre-empt here that you should probably look over the lesson again because it doesn't look like you did all the homework. You're missing the planes exercise from part 1, and all homework from part 2 (ellipses) and part 3 (boxes).
In order to help reduce the workload, /u/Uncomfortable will no longer be writing critiques for homework that does not follow the requirements (medium, quantity, completion of previous lessons etc) stipulated in the lesson notes (which can be found in the comments section of every lesson). You will be asked to do it again.
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Sugarfight in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (version 2)"
2015-07-12 13:41
I'm just going to pre-empt here that you should probably look over the lesson again because it doesn't look like you did all the homework. You're missing the planes exercise from part 1, and all homework from part 2 (ellipses) and part 3 (boxes).