Runensucher in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"
2017-04-27 20:15
I finally did it. I got slower with every single step...
There is so much to say and ask, but of course I want to hear your opinion first. http://imgur.com/a/2TcBe
PS: It's not exactly two pages with dissections, but on some textures, I spent a lot of time, so... I think it's okay (?). Please let it be okay. :)
Runensucher in the post "250 Box Challenge"
2017-02-02 23:07
Can you tell me if this is a proper way to correct my boxes? And how exactly can I learn from it? Is just staring at it enough?
I started with extending my lines, then I added new corners and drew new lines, all with a different colour. Then I drew on top of the new lines with black again. Then I added the hatching.
Runensucher in the post "250 Box Challenge"
2017-02-01 21:25
I was wondering about my corrections since I've made the same mistakes again and again. I've seen the solution with the vanishing points at other submissions but I wasn't sure about it, because there wasn't a hint how to correct the boxes in the actual explanation.
Should I draw the correct lines before or after adding a vanishing point? And is it helpful to correct boxes that are... kinda hopeless?
I can do the 250 cylinders additive to lesson 2, right?
Thank you.. I'm a little excited to go on. :)
Runensucher in the post "250 Box Challenge"
2017-02-01 00:25
I did it! Here are my results. http://imgur.com/a/Dz0Cl
The challenge felt really helpful. Hope to get even more out of it with your critique. :)
Runensucher in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"
2017-01-20 20:42
Hello! :)
I finished my rotated boxes. Do you want to see it?
Before I start with the rest of the boxes I wanted to ask you something about the nearplane-farplane-thing.
I started a private conversation about your exercises in a forum and my dialogue partner sensed something out.
You may look at this:
https://s25.postimg.org/xf5g5iqj3/example_boxesnearfar.png
He marked the left (far) plane of the left box in brown. It's obvious now that the plane is way bigger than the right (near) plane.
Did I miss something essencial about this rule? I strongly relied on this rule for my organic perpective excercise. (Well, mostly. ^^)
Runensucher in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"
2017-01-09 21:43
Hello there!
It's me again. I updated my album at imgur. You can see the full lesson now.
First of all I want to point out something: I really want to put the same effort into my exercises that you put into writing and evaluating the lessons. This goes for writing in english as well.
For the start, I seperated the sheets of the first part of the lesson for your comfort. Have fun!
About the rotated boxes (you can read it, it's no self-critique) - This was my second attempt. It doesn't came out good and I started to feel bad about it. It slowed the process a lot, so I decided to skip it and to hear what you have to say.
And here is something about the rough perspective exercise: Don't blame me to much for the bad lines. The paper I used was not good and drawing two days on it really had a bad influence. Took me some time to realize it.
That's (almost) all I wanted to say. Maybe you are interested to hear that my recent warm ups are way better than these images since the first lesson took me so long. Hehe. =)
As always: Thank you for your impact. Doing your excercises really changes my way of life.
Runensucher in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"
2016-12-02 22:12
Hello world, Hi Uncomfortable,
this is lesson 1.1. My first three days started with wibbly-wobbly lines. While reading through reddit and the self critique I realized my mistake and corrected it the next three days. (Even if it doesn't look like it. o.o)
I have to admit, that at some points I haven't gone through lines eight times. The paper sucked up the ink very well and I was afraid of ruining it.
I would like to give more informations, but since english isn't my mother tongue, posting stuff is kind of exhausting. ^^
I have a question about the planes. When I draw the lines that go through the middle, do I have to plan the starting and the ending point? I mostly tried to make them parallel to the outer lines and it came out well. But the other planes doesn't look wrong either.
Thank you for sharing your expertise.
Hannes
P.S. I hope the bad quality of the photos do not impact your analysis to much. I will only photograph one side in future.
Runensucher in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"
2017-05-06 13:46
I wasn't even noticing that I had trouble with this exercise. First I thought, I might've been unfocused, but it was more thant that. Thank you for pointing it out.
[SPOILER] There might be a small improvement, but there was this segment on number six, where it really felt right. [/SPOILER]
Here it is: http://imgur.com/a/ZJlx6