Uncomfortable's Advice from /r/ArtFundamentals

Redguitars in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-01 13:03

Thanks for feedback! I am really enjoying the progress I've made over the lessons 1 and 2.

Redguitars in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-03-26 21:32

Hi Uncomfortable,

Thanks for the critique on my lesson 2 homework. I indeed see that I am not thinking through my lines before i draw. Anyway here is my extra home work on lesson 2:

https://imgur.com/a/sDKdvzZ

link to the old thread:

https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/9cvsme/lesson_2_organic_forms_contour_lines_dissections/eh2lqmo?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x

Redguitars in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2019-02-22 21:43

Hi Uncomfortable!

Love the new website, I can actually navigate it well on an ipad now ;). Here is my submission for lesson 2.

https://imgur.com/gallery/3zeUSTX

some thoughts:

I loved the arrows exercise, it is very rewarding to see the arrow just come out or go into the page
I was struggling with the dissections and textures. What surprised me was that when I took a step back and looked at it from a distance it actually looked quite convincing. Also it was really slow going
The form intersections puzzled me a lot. Especially trying to mate cylinders with boxes. Also I notice that I still struggle to construct a good 2-point perspective box.

Looking forward to your feedback!

Redguitars in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-06-21 18:07

Thanks for the feedback Uncomfortable. Yeah I have some trouble with the overshooting the lines. One of the reasons for overshooting I noticed myself is that I use it in order to not have to accurately define my end point of the line before starting out. I just make a longer line and cut it off at the length I want with the next line... anyway will work on that for sure on the 250 box challenge!

Redguitars in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-06-11 19:18

Hi Uncomfortable, thanks so much for the great lessons! Here is my submission of lesson 1: https://imgur.com/a/xPycZdO

(I did lesson 1 back in 2017 with community feedback, thats here for reference: https://photos.app.goo.gl/OaToetwrYWvidTeh2)