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poelsemaker in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-07-28 21:05

Here we go! - http://imgur.com/a/yqOcn

I feel like I struggle with having a confident line when the lines are short/small, suppose its because its so short I feel I cant go too fast and go «over» and instead end up going to slow and becoming woobly. Though I feel I became aware of this towards the end and it became a little more confident.

I struggled with some of the self-critique I see, but although the red lines may not always reflect it I think I saw what was wrong with a lot of them, but I was just hard to reorganize the whole box.

Hope there is any improvement at all though! What's the next step?

poelsemaker in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2017-07-25 11:18

Thanks for the quick reply! So should I submit the "correction" excercise of the rough perspectives together with the 250 boxes challenge? And yeah, a couple of days here was more like a week so much more then 2 hours !

I try to be patience and find that towards the ends of 1 hour sessions with such repeating exercises I tend to lose focuse, so then I'd rather come back later with sharp focus then continue and be sloppy almost on purpose in order to finish.

poelsemaker in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2017-07-24 20:08

Hey! I just become a patreon so I would be able to partake in this critique section, so I hope it works out with you getting the correct username and all. Anyways - I just completed lesson 1 which I spent a couple of days on and tried to draw approx 1 hour per day. I really struggle with confidence in that I'll ever become good, but I hope I'll stick to it!

I went through each section, but the first try at the rotating box exercise didn't go very well so I attempted it a second time as the last drawing. I think it went better, but I fudged up some of the shading, it become too many lines. Do you think I should work more on any of the aspects here?

http://imgur.com/a/qmf8R