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PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-11-09 03:06

So I took what you said into account and have put in extra effort into figuring out this whole shoulder thing, I think I've got the hang of it now, somehow it helped to imagine my arm and forearm being held up by soft elastic bands, I was making too much harsh quick movements so have started to relax the arm more and let it do it's thing.

The organic forms are really frustrating me, the ability to see depth in the page comes and goes and I'm trying to figure out how to get into that zone more, I feel like I'm making some progress, be it small.

Here it is, https://imgur.com/gallery/3SAgs

Also if I'm posting too much stuff to be critiqued just let me know, I understand you have a buttload of assignments to mark. Thanks man

PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-11-07 22:46

You're right, I'm too used to a sketchy style because it's second nature, I'm going to put in extra effort there, thanks man

PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-11-04 17:37

Haven't kept on top of it as much as I'd like but I've still done something. Having alot of trouble tackling complex shapes with my shoulder as I need to move quick to avoid wobble but because it's quick it doesn't leave room for complex twists and turns.crit appreciated if anything stands out or you notice something is off, thanks.

Revising lessons 1 and 2 and some hands https://imgur.com/gallery/xJT8t

PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-10-30 16:32

No problemo, it isn't much considering how much you put into the program but it's something I guess.

Would it be alright if I upload some redone homework on this post from 1 and 2 to get some crit ?

PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-10-30 14:08

Hey man, thanks for the crit. I've been doing 4-7 hours a day this past month and haven't been doing anything other than the exercises given so I think I'm going to start also drawing for fun which is something I haven't done in ages. I'm going to keep doing at least an hour a day of the exercises in 1-2 and then draw from life for a 3-4 hours as well every day, I'll move onto lesson 3 in a week, wish me luck and thanks again man!

PlugTurtled in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-10-29 02:43

K so over the course of this lesson I started to stagnate and lost focus, I'm trying to keep at it but my brain just isn't putting all in, when I got to the floppy worm orgy part of the lesson I pretty much just wanted to get it over with and so wasn't able to get into that 3d space.

I uploaded some organic forms I did before I started the course as well. Thanks man and sorry if I sound like a grouchy mofo

https://imgur.com/gallery/EsrVD

PlugTurtled in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-10-24 00:51

Damn that was painstaking, got a bit of improved shoulder control and also figured out some perspective things. Here it is https://imgur.com/gallery/qm55C