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OrdinaryMushroom in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-03-09 23:40

Oh, thank you Uncomfortable. I feel very encouraged by this, and I look forward to the next challenge. And I'll keep at my ellipse exercises (:

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-03-09 02:42

Hello Uncomfortable :)

This is my assignment : https://imgur.com/a/GyUMjMI

I think I kind of deteriorated towards the end there /:

Thank you for your time in advance <3

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2019-01-21 06:12

I will do these things. Im always nervous about submitting work, and then always feel encouraged and a renewed motivation by your insight. Thank you :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2019-01-20 06:20

Awesome. Thank you :) here it is: https://imgur.com/a/jV4ITIQ

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2019-01-20 04:23

Hi Uncomfortable,

I completed this assignment before you made updates about the rules/tool allowances/prereqs for it. I was wondering if I should show you where I am at before retackling it with the new rules? I did struggle with it a lot and perhaps having some guidance before redoing it might help me improve.

Many thanks,

Ordinary Mushroom

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2018-11-06 00:20

Thanks Pinocho8! and likewise :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2018-10-27 19:33

Thank you for your critique Uncomfortable. I tend to feel anxious before submitting homework but your clear directions transform that feeling into renewed determination :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2018-10-26 04:52

Hi Uncomfortable, here is my lesson 5 hw https://imgur.com/a/kRpkBUC

Thank you for your time :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2018-10-16 19:24

Oh my fineliners are dying haha. Ill get some new ones.

Thank you for all your advice and encouragement. And Ill certainly attempt to draw more confidently. :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2018-10-16 01:17

Hi Uncomfortable. Here is my lesson 4 hw. Thank you for your time :) https://imgur.com/a/gSXuaLm

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-09-07 03:12

Great. Thank you :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-09-07 01:09

Hi Uncomfortable,

Thank you very much for your encouragement and criticism :) . On the topic of connecting branches, I was wondering how the connecting ellipse should behave (when there is no ball). I was attempting to connect branches to the trunk using an ellipse that followed the principles of the rest of the branch but I know this was not effective. I suspect that what I should have done, and what you are suggesting that I do, is to draw an the ellipse that wraps around the form of the trunk.

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-09-06 08:32

Hi Uncomfortable. Here is my lesson 3 homework: https://imgur.com/a/tuXxKke . Thank you for your time :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-06-30 08:11

Yes. I will make it a priority to improve on my ellipses and contour ellipses and how they should behave on organic forms. I really appreciate your thorough and articulate critiques, it all makes sense and I learn so much from it. Thank you :)

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-06-29 06:23

Hi Uncomfortable,

Here is my lesson 2 homework https://imgur.com/a/ARGAJ3h.

Thank you for your time.

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-06-09 21:28

Mmm I understand and agree with what you're saying on all fronts. I'll keep your advice in mind as I move forward. Thank you for your feedback and encouragement \^-\^

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-06-09 15:45

Hi Uncomfortable :). This is my submission: https://imgur.com/a/n45HbQO. I'd like to apologise for my inconsistency throughout the assignment. I made a number of changes during the process due to obvious realisations including how I should not be using different fineliner thicknesses and that I should try to ensure that my parallel (in 3D) lines didn't become too parallel (in 2D). I really learned how extremely far and long my journey will be to improve my ghosting technique and that I need to toughen up and accept my failures in order to grow. Thank you for your guidance.

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-05-13 23:16

Thank you very much for your encouragement and your advice. I will do my best to really take on and apply what you have said. Im pretty excited ^-^

OrdinaryMushroom in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-05-13 08:10

Hello! Here is my homework:

https://imgur.com/a/znsv8Q1

Thank you for your time Uncomfortable :)