noicenator in the post "250 Box Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-01 05:34
Wow, I can't believe I finished. Here are the goods: https://imgur.com/a/R6hzZA7
I noticed that I have trouble sometimes with making the finishing marks "through" the box. I think that's what threw my boxes off the most.
noicenator in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-18 02:16
Thank you for detailed critique! I appreciate it. Ill keep practicing rotating boxes while taking on the 250 box challenge.
noicenator in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-07-17 23:03
Lesson 1
Hello, here's my homework for Lesson 1. Thank you for looking at them!
Some thoughts I had while doing the homework, (sorry it's kind of long; no need to read through all of it, I guess I just wanted to verbalize to myself/record what I got from my HW)
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Superimposing lines - I notice that it gets harder to stay true to the line as they get longer; I fray a lot more.
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Ghosting lines/boxes I tend to either: overshoot, undershoot, or let the line trail off/curve off as I get towards the end. Idk if that's my brain trying to take control or whatever.
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Ellipses - I find that my first ellipse is always rough & doesn't match the borders, but after a 2nd/3rd iteration, I manage to fit all the borders.
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Boxes - I had the most trouble with these. I couldn't rotate my boxes correctly and they just look like a mess lol. I also had trouble with foreshortening when it came to the "organic perspective boxes".
noicenator in the post "250 Box Challenge (Patreon Critique Thread)"
2019-08-02 03:25
Thanks for the feedback. I definitely have a lot more room to improve lol, especially when it comes to rotating the boxes and capturing different angles. Here are the extra 20 boxes