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Mr_Kinto in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-10-11 06:41

Hey, thanks for giving feedback for both of them!

I figured the form intersections would be my weakest area. I was surprised that the intersections themselves weren't the point of the exercise, I must have missed/forgotten when you said that.

I'm guessing the reason why the point is just to have them look like they occupy the same space is so I can start building large, complex 3D objects out of primitives.

But, uh, aside from it just "looking right", is there any other way to know that I've correctly made them occupy the same space?

Mr_Kinto in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2016-10-07 08:56

Hey,

So you said not to sneak in multiple submissions, but also to wait for feedback before moving on to the next lesson. Problem is, my two completed lessons are lesson 2 and the 250 cylinder challenge. I'm not sure which is supposed to come first, or if there's any order at all for these two.

I guess I'll post links to both and you can decide which was supposed to come first. If it doesn't matter, I guess I'd rather have lesson 2 critiqued.

Lesson 2 here: http://imgur.com/a/AmSqx

250 cylinder challenge here: http://imgur.com/a/5bdGJ

Unfortunately I can't pledge anything at the moment, being in a foreign country with no income and rapidly dwindling resources, so I guess I'll have to carry on on my own until a job comes in (maybe by the new year!). But I greatly appreciate all the help you have offered for free so far!