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loboflex in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-07-20 21:52

Thank you very much for the feedback! :)

loboflex in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections (version 2)"

2015-07-20 18:13

Hello, here's my submission for lesson 2: http://imgur.com/a/yOjid

I hope it's ok that I used a smaller pen when laying out the forms to be intersected, and then went over the "visible" edges with a 0.5 pen afterwards. I tried using only the 0.5 pen at first, but then I had trouble conveying which lines were supposed to be hidden.

loboflex in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (version 2)"

2015-07-18 16:10

Thanks for the feedback, I will give lesson 2 a try next. :)

loboflex in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes (version 2)"

2015-07-18 07:48

Hello!

Thank you for all the effort you're putting into this; I really appreciate it.

I finished the first lesson a few days ago, though I figured I'd let it mature for a bit before submitting.

http://imgur.com/a/ybMzq

I see now that a few of the rough perspective boxes' lines are pretty far off, though it wasn't immediately apparent to me after I had drawn them. Are there any tricks to spotting my own mistakes, or should I just make a habit of checking everything with a ruler afterwards?