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KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"

2016-07-05 20:16

Hello again! As always i thank you, that give us some of your time to check our homeworks is truly amazing. That said, Here it's my 7th Homework!.

I realized that i had some troubles with cylinders so i worked on them along the homework, and when it came to plane + submarine i think they came out right.

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2016-04-01 23:24

Yop! Long time no ... i don't even know what to say. Aaaaany way, as always thanks for helping us with your lessons and critics, and Here is my lesson 6 homework!

On a side note: one of the pens i use started to die out when i was beginning this lesson. Which means the lines were whiter, more shallow, etc. I actually really liked being able to throw lines, it allowed me to throw lot's of marks and lines that were for positions, and not a final thingy. Aaand that pen completly died at around the 6th drawing.

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (version 3)"

2016-02-24 16:46

Ohhhhh. Now i get it. Yeah will remember to do it from now on. Thanks a lot!

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (version 3)"

2016-02-24 04:10

Thanks again for all the feedback, i admit i was having real problem with fur, so your tip is much welcome.

And about the ellipses I may have misunderstand what you meant. If it's completly drawing the ellipses that we use to give a body "3Dness", and not just the parts that we can see about it, i believe i did so this time (in comparison to the original homework). An example is in the squirrel tail

If it's something else i apologize for misunderstanding and forwardly ask: What did you mean?

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (version 3)"

2016-02-23 18:37

Here are the extra 2 pages.

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals (version 3)"

2016-02-16 20:34

Hello again! As always thanks for the free critiques and lessons, that said Here is my lesson 5 homework!

Just a comment for context, absolutely all of the animal positions in the drawings are based from a picture. Exeeeept the quimeras. I tried to make em take some interesting positions that i hadn't drawn so i did struggle a bit. I think the rabbit-bear came okay, but the choco-wolf came a taaaad weird.

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids (version 3)"

2016-01-08 19:32

Okay, here are the two extra lay-ins you requested. Just in case you want to re-check the original homework to compare i will leave the link here.

I did the organic intersection as you reccomended and while i was at it i thought of a technique to draw (which i latter used on these new insects). Prolly some people do it, but anyway, rather than drawing the whole organic form at once thinking how would it go, what i did was draw the "elipses" at some key points, and finish the whole form taking those elipses as a guide. What are your thoughts in this?

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids (version 3)"

2016-01-02 04:02

Well atleast i get the chance to say Happy new Year oh dear professor! Dramatism intensifies. As always thanks for checking our homeworks and here's mine for lesson 4!

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids (version 3)"

2015-12-27 00:21

Hi again! Merry... christmas? Anyway, as always i thank you for putting your time to check on our homeworks, and with that said, [Here is my lesson 4 Homework!] (http://imgur.com/a/Sfoee)

KiwiYoz in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants (version 3)"

2015-12-01 02:53

Hi again! I won't stop saying thanks, nope, i wont. So... Here's my lesson 3 homework! I found it more enjoyable compared to the other 2 lessons, but also found it tougher. Specially cause of details. For example on the first full drawing (a mint plant) i found it utterly impossible to correctly draw the pattern it has.