jujacks in the post "250 Cylinder Challenge"
2018-10-28 16:24
Hola El Box Papi,
I've worked very hard to produce these mediocre cylinders. They are what I can do now but I'm sure I'll get better as I keep doing these lessons. I've followed your directions as best I could in the lessons and often come back to this thread to read critiques. I still have a very difficult time drawing ellipses correctly. I would start most mornings with a ellipses in tables to try and compensate for this... but I didn't see too much improvement. Any suggestions about the general construction, such as foreshortening or degree of ellipse would be very helpful. I'm going to attempt the the remainder of Lesson 2 which I had planned to be done by the end of the month.
I used a different image hosting site so I wouldn't have to spend 20 minutes rearranging my images in imgur: https://postimg.cc/gallery/1amyfnx5e/
I didn't respond to your critique for my box challenge but I look back to it often to the advice you gave, thanks in advance!
jujacks in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"
2018-10-31 15:49
Hello Father-o-boxes,
Here's my Lesson 2 :https://imgur.com/a/legNuhy
I feel pretty confident in the progress I'm making, except for the textures, I did use a bit of hatching and scribbling in a few of them. It is the idea I have the least amount of practice in, I will be doing the 25 texture challenge over the next month and look forward to learning more in that area.
Let me know where I can improve, thanks!