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jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"

2018-07-02 19:31

Thanks so much for all your feedback during these lessons, and for drawabox as a whole. I actually just ordered Scott Robertsons book as a reward for finishing lesson 8! Anyway, Ill keep your feedback about vanishing points in mind as I go forwards (they definitely feel like a crutch that adds stiffness to my work when I overuse them/ have them directly on the page). Also, I will definitely be back for the design-oriented lessons! Good luck moving forwards with the website rebuild, and again, thank you for these awesome lessons!!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 7: Drawing Vehicles"

2018-07-02 04:34

Here's my lesson for critique! I realized halfway through that I had been aligning the minor axis of my wheel's ellipses to the wrong vanishing point. Overall though, I'm happy with the last few vehicles ,and I got much faster at proportion measurements and overall construction by the last few drawings. Thank you in advance! https://imgur.com/a/MWOUhsb (oops. here's the link. my brain is fried from all these vehicles).

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2018-06-20 01:10

Sounds great, thanks so much. I did definitely notice that my initial boxes were off in the beginning, but seeing them through to the end despite the initial error was rewarding. Thanks again, and Ill have my lesson 7 up soon!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 6: Drawing Everyday Objects"

2018-06-19 06:03

Hi again, heres my work for lesson 6. https://imgur.com/gallery/QDr7XLj

Thanks!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2018-06-14 00:45

Thanks so much for your feedback. I noticed the sketchiness/ vagueness somewhat while I drew (and even more so the next day when I looked back on them), and the camels definitely felt like a turning point. My initial vagueness may have come from the fact that I have been starting to do digital painting lately (maybe a looser painting mentality is leaking into my line-drawing?), or because I've had less time to sketch and practice and am getting sloppy. I'm not sure, but I will definitely try and move away from that for future lessons. I'll be careful not to skip steps, and be more intentional and neat going forwards. Thanks again!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 5: Drawing Animals"

2018-06-13 04:53

It's been a while, got caught up in school! Lesson 5: https://imgur.com/a/rLC8fQd

Thanks!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2018-05-15 23:03

Ok, gotcha, thanks for the feedback! I realize now that I've been switching back and forth between the "container" approach and the "stacking" approach, without much thought as to why. Anyway, I'll continue stacking forms moving forwards, and hold off on the detail until my constructions are solidly established. Thanks again.

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2018-05-15 01:41

Hi! Thanks so much for your critique on the last lesson. Here's some creepy bugs for ya!

https://imgur.com/a/VfmHDY2

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-05-01 22:34

Thanks for your feedback! Ill keep all of this in mind as I start on lesson 4. Ill work with my contour lines at form intersections and leaf shape outlines. Also, its so true that my reference photos are getting stiff! I tend to get really caught up in details/ replicating instead of constructing when drawing from reference. Anyway, thanks again!

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-05-01 04:49

Hi there! Heres my work for lesson 3.

https://imgur.com/a/xlm4A1p

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-04-18 20:08

Thank you for the excellent feedback. Ive done pages of organic forms w/ contour curves and 2 pages of intersections. I wasnt fully grasping the alignment of curves/ ellipses before, and I definitely didnt quite get the organic intersections, especially the limited use of cast shadows and thickened lines. Also, apologies for attempting such complex organic forms, after you clearly said in the video DONT hahah (I missed this the first time). Hopefully Ive gotten the hang of things a little better now!

https://imgur.com/a/6tSlVki

jordan_dean in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-04-15 03:46

Hi again! I worked on my 250 box challenge in conjunction with this lesson, hope thats alright. https://imgur.com/a/YWvMK

My 250 box challenge is up as well. Thanks a bunch!

jordan_dean in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-04-15 00:52

Heres my completed challenge! Ive begun work on lesson two as well, should have that up very soon too! Thanks :) https://imgur.com/a/vTLAI