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HurOKane in the post "Lesson 4: Applying Construction to Insects and Arachnids (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-07-29 14:31

Lesson 4 hot of the presses. Construction and perspective especially building on top of the initial ellipses and spheres was a struggle. Thanks for the help!

https://imgur.com/gallery/9yXtyR4

HurOKane in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2019-02-02 01:08

Thanks! I appreciate all the comments and guidance!

HurOKane in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2019-02-01 14:24

Lesson 2 HW done. The textures, dissections, and form intersections took much longer than I though they would. Superimposing line weight is definitely something I need to get cleaner at.

https://imgur.com/a/zyDWued

Thanks for taking the time to look!

HurOKane in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-07-19 01:15

Thanks for the critiques! I'll keep working on the ghosting. I totally agree it feels like a confidence/second guessing myself issue.

HurOKane in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-07-18 03:08

Just finished lesson 1 and uploaded here https://imgur.com/gallery/Cny6GBZ

I realized I'm missing a couple of the ruler 2 point perspective exercises.

Still lacking a lot of confidence in terms of ghosting accuracy, I feel like a lot of my boxes suffer from it, sometime I feel like the point I plot should be pretty good, but my line ends up a bit off and throws off the convergences. I feel like often I am nailing quite a few in a row and then all of a sudden or the next day the accuracy is gone. I'm sure it'll come with time...

I was originally holding my pen resting on my ring finger like I do when I write, however I felt like I was holding too hard and that switching to normal dynamic tripod gave me much more "smoothness". I still feel I'm lacking a bit of confidence in holding it this way as its new, but it feels like the right path?

Looking forward to your comments!