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Enkadery in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-11-15 23:07

Thank you for your critique! I appreciate the time you take doing this. I will keep this in mind as I move on and as I practice exercises from earlier lessons. Sometimes I ghost my starting ellipse or shape way too many times. I need to learn to commit and work with what I've put on the paper.

Enkadery in the post "Lesson 4: Drawing Insects and Arachnids"

2017-11-15 19:23

Lesson 4 here: https://imgur.com/a/6k8QD

Some of these I really enjoyed and some felt like such a grind - the spider was so hard to study because they are so creepy. I had trouble with the ladybug just trying to get a decent ellipse to start with that even looked like a ladybug body. Also found the 'bugs have triangles' notes really useful for these exercises.

Anyways, thanks in advance for checking these out!

Enkadery in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2017-10-27 18:31

Well. Yep. This was a bit of a grind. I do feel like I am improving a little from where I first attempted to construct forms on my own but clearly there are still some issues.

https://imgur.com/a/vWNjv

Maybe I need to do several more pages of leaves in order to get that line flow going?

I decided to just submit what I have and get your critique in hopes you can tell me where I am going wrong. Thanks a bunch in advance. I appreciate your time here.

Enkadery in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-10-18 16:08

Thank you for these notes - I'm going to try some more pages of intersections until it feels like it is becoming a little more natural to think/see that way. At what point do you recommend people try the cylinder challenge?

Enkadery in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2017-10-17 18:44

Heya! Here is my submission for Lesson 2. Some days I think I have my head wrapped around the 3d hard form intersections and then the next day I don't. I will definitely keep practicing them.

Part 1 - https://imgur.com/a/OyYuu

Part 2 - https://imgur.com/a/3fYMj

Part 3 - https://imgur.com/a/z5OpS

Thank you!

Enkadery in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-10-14 15:45

Thank you for the critique! I will keep going over them - I find it is nice to warm up a bit with some boxes and lines each time I sit down so I can keep checking for mistakes then.

Enkadery in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2017-10-13 01:42

Here we go! 250 Box Challenge.

https://imgur.com/a/wj4Xm

I've tried to mark most mistakes in orange. Earlier on I extended lines while on later pages I tried to just mark in a correct line. I also experimented with line weight more in the later boxes. Thanks!