ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 3: Drawing Plants"

2018-11-11 12:26

Hello Uncomfortable,

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Here's my homework for lesson 3: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1SybFyqo6tmvykmYcmEmj7_-7d8E1CDi9

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I mostly focused on the construction part and not about details.

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I struggled the most with the plant number 4. I had a really hard time constructing the small leafs.

I'm also not sure about the construction of the tomato "balls". I tried various attempts and stayed at the end with this.

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Really looking forward for your critic.

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Greetings,

Adrian

ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-10-07 08:20

Wow, this is really giving me a motivation boost, as I trully thought I didn't do a good job here. This will make me push even more.

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Thank you really much Uncomfortable, this is helping me a ton.

ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2018-10-06 08:14

Hi Uncomfortable, it took me way longer to complete lesson 2 then I wanted to.

Anyway, here's the link to the PDF: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1tRKrLyfT73QzC7zRw3S6joErhauaW6Aw

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I had a lot of trouble adding clean lineweight. I don't know, everytime I laid down the initial linework and then wanted to go over with lineweight on some parts, I got really shaky hands. Really need to train this. I'm also not that happy with my first dissection sausage but I think the second one came out a little better.

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The form intersections where my nightmare, my brain just shut down couple times during this excercise. But I think my hatching improved during the intersections.

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Thanks in advance for your feedback.

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Cheers

Adrian

ctrz7 in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-08-06 07:50

Thanks a lot. I'll definitly keep your critics in mind when I'm doing the other lessons.

ctrz7 in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-08-05 14:34

I just finished the 250 box challenge and I really learned a lot from it.

Here's the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/17p3rgeIMRV4oABtAHoB4aXykU9Njdgr5/view?usp=sharing

(It's from 250 downwards, I couldn't reorder the pages.)

I feel a lot saver now to put lines on paper, but I have to say, that to the end I got again a little nervous and the lines more shaky and less precise.

Looking forward for your critic.

ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-07-23 08:37

Thanks for the response. I'll send the 250 box challenge in before I start with lesson 2.

ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-07-22 15:48

Thank you very much for this awesome critic.

I'll do the funnels excercise as a warm up and will work with the center line.

I'll start the 250 box challenge by tomorrow. Should I only do this challenge and hand it in, or should I maybe do it parallel to the lesson 2?

Thanks in advance.

ctrz7 in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-07-21 17:13

Hi Uncomfortable

I just finished all the homework for lesson 1. And I just got a patreon about 30 minutes ago.

I'm really looking forward to your critics.

Here's the link: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1nvB-v4FNkDQpJom3kRjGbSRIIdML-JdO (I hope a PDF file is okey)

Thanks in advance.