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Corncanm in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-22 22:31

I didn't realize curves going outside the silhouette makes it weird until you've mentioned it. after looking closely for it, it does look weird even for my eyes. I couldn't have found this out with myself.

thanks for the feedback. your feedback teaches me the things that make my drawings weird but don't know why. I'll try out and grasp those weak points you've mentioned.

Corncanm in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-22 10:39

Hi Uncomfortable.

here's my lesson 2 work.

https://imgur.com/a/qFzEWip

This was really hard for me. Especially texture analysis; the time interval between texture and others... texture analysis was horrible for me.

anyway, thank you for your hard work!

Corncanm in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-13 23:21

Hello Uncomfortable, here are the 50 boxes.

https://imgur.com/a/KtDgkZp

Corncanm in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2019-01-08 06:33

I'm a bit confused. Should I draw shallower boxes with dramatic foreshortening? or just boxes with shallow foreshortening?

I think it's the latter, so I'll try the latter one out.

anyways, thank you for your feedback. I'm glad my boxes done beforehand is alright. for the next time I'll be drawing on clear blank sheet.

Corncanm in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2019-01-07 00:40

Hello Uncomfortable, these are the other two that I've not submitted yet.

Ellipses

https://imgur.com/a/7tqcfMA

Boxes

https://imgur.com/a/GniqbS2

I submitted Boxes that were drawn when I first draw, so those were not drawn on A4 paper.

Corncanm in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-12-28 02:41

Hello Uncomfortable,here is my lesson1 after the patron subscription. I really appreciate your feedback :)

Corncanm in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-12-26 02:29

Thank you for the feedback. I now know what I've not been doing.

I'll keep on drawing shallower boxes between warmup times. and also submit lesson 1 materials.

Corncanm in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2018-12-21 13:25

https://imgur.com/a/V0KLuoX

Submitting 250boxes.

Hope this goes well.