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asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-10 02:06

I'm starting to struggle with this lesson I think. I've done a quick version of it to prevent myself from thinking through things too much and to resist the urge to polish (and I use the term loosely).

http://imgur.com/a/fh6hW

As I suspect, this may still not be what you're looking for. If that's correct I think I'm going to try copying a few other artists samples to see if I can figure out what it is that I'm doing wrong. Are there any samples in this thread that you think demonstrate this concept well that I should focus on?

asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-09 21:12

Hello once again. I've finished redoing the second part of the lesson and am ready for my critique.

https://imgur.com/a/IGjRB

As always I really appreciate your honest feedback and your taking the time to do this.

The more time I spend working on the lessons the more I'm seeing the method behind the madness.

asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-06 18:21

Thanks again!

asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-06 17:21

Good afternoon Uncomfortable,

I've started working on my redo of Lesson 2 and I was wondering if you could critic my contours before I get to dissection and intersection. I want to make sure I'm on the right track.

https://imgur.com/a/jsvwm

I understand that you very busy and if you would rather wait for me to submit my entire lesson before you take a look though. Just let me know. :)

asplosions in the post "OPTIONAL CHALLENGE: 250 Boxes"

2015-02-06 14:45

I will, thank you.

asplosions in the post "OPTIONAL CHALLENGE: 250 Boxes"

2015-02-05 19:02

As per your recommendation I've taken the challenge.

I can't seem to get the link to work on this computer but I'll go back and fix it tonight. Here it is for the time being: https://imgur.com/a/Bsc2H

It took waaaaay longer than I thought it would. At some points I would catch myself rushing through it and had to force myself to slow down. I bet you can tell when that happened.

asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-02 01:22

Will do! Thanks for taking the time to write the critique!

asplosions in the post "LESSON 2: Organic Forms, Contour Lines, Dissections and Form Intersections"

2015-02-01 23:39

Hello! Here is my second lesson submission.

Thanks in advance!

asplosions in the post "LESSON 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2015-02-01 23:11

Thanks for the fantastic advice.

I've just finished the second lesson but I'll probably jump back to try the box challenge. I'll make a point to take more time with my shading in the future.

asplosions in the post "LESSON 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2015-01-31 02:59

I've completed my first lesson Professor Uncomfortable, sir.

I'm sorry for the potato quality photos, if they aren't good enough for criticism I'll take more tomorrow when I can shoot them in the sunlight.

Lesson 1